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Mario's Unexpected House Party

Posted by nietzlawe Aug. 10, 2008 @ 1:17 PM EDT

MARIO'S UNEXPECTED HOUSE PARTY

I have started to work on a script, which will be used to create a Super Mario Brothers Flash video. This is a first draft and needs more work to be finished. If there are any Flash artists out there interested in using my script, just PM me and I will let you use it and I'll finish off the rest of the script for you.

MARIO'S UNEXPECTED HOUSE PARTY SCRIPT
WRITTEN BY KEVAN11TWENTY7 AND NIETZLAWE

[CAST]

Mario; Luigi; Toad; Bowser; Bullet Bill x 3; Goomba x 3; Koopa x 2; Lakitu; Shy Guy x 2; Boo; little guy who has to leave.

[Location description and beginning scene]

The ground is solid platform.

There is a green pipe on the left side of the screen; in the middle of the screen is Mario and Luigi's house with an outside view.

The sky is clear blue and Lakitu the cloud [cloud with a face who drops spiky things] is up there with an expressionless face.

Mario walks into the house. We hear his footsteps as he walks. We see Lakitu giggle [a really evil childish giggle] after Mario enters the house. [We hear the house door open and close]

Screen goes blank [black screen]and it says 'To Be Continued' and then two seconds pass with silence and then it says 'Immediately'. *Spoken in a quick comedic American accent.

[Scene inside house between Mario and Luigi]

Luigi is talking on the phone to a mysterious caller.

[Luigi] "I keep'a telling you he is not'a here."

[Mysterious Voice] "Listen we need Mario to come and pick up a delivery on urgent orders of the Princess, its very important."

[Luigi] "I keep'a telling you... Oh wait... He is here, he has'a just arrived now."

[Mario] "What the hell are you'a doing a'Luigi?

[Luigi] "Nothing, eet is'a some guy on the phone, he wants'a to speak to you."

[Mario] "I told you'a Luigi not to

[Mario] "I am putting my utmost trust in you keeping this place spotless Luigi.

[Scene of Mario leaving the house]

When Mario leaves the house, [sound of house door opening and closing] we see that it is now dark outside and we can hear crickets.

Mario leaves the house to go into town; we hear his footsteps as he walks off the right side of the screen.

Mario has given Luigi the responsibility of looking after the house while he is gone. When Mario is walking outside, Lakitu spots him and seeing that Mario is leaving the house, he floats back giggling in the opposite direction [to the left] to report to Bowser that Luigi is now home alone.

[Meanwhile back inside Luigi's house]

It is late at night and Luigi is sat on the settee, he begins to get very tired and falls asleep.[We hear him yawning and eventually snoring when he falls asleep]

We see a view of the main living room and then suddenly watch the door open [sound of talking voices and then the house door is opened]

With Luigi asleep, all the bad guys enter into the house and begin to have a wild party, trashing the place and playing loud music. [Voices can be heard, sounds of banging and loud music]

Scene of Bowser and his gang talking...

Finally this scene ends with one of the gang shaving Luigi's eyebrows off[we hear a shaving noise] and writing all over his face. [A squeaky noise from the sound of the pen] This causes Luigi to jump up in shock.

[Luigi] "What's'a going on?" *spoken in a very eccentric manner like an old man confused after waking up in his armchair*

Cut to a close up of his face, shown to comedy effect with writing all over his face and his eyebrows missing.

Luigi sees his house being wrecked by Bowser and co, and begins to get very angry [we see angry clouds burst above his head]. Luigi goes into the other room and comes back and pulls out his weapon. In a scene reminiscent to Scarface, he says:

[Luigi] "Say hello to my'a little friend!"

Luigi then proceeds to put his little friend Toad down in front of him and ushers him to attack the wild party guests.

[Luigi] "Get them'a Toadie"

But Toad doesn't do anything; he just stands there completely still, blinking. [All we hear is the sound of crickets and awkward coughing] as Bowser and his friends stand there motionless and quiet as well.

Seeing his plan is not working, Luigi grabs Toad and starts using him as a battering ram as he uses him to beat the hell out of the first bad guy, all the other bad guys see this and start running away. [Screams and sounds of running away]

[Scene back outside the house]

The bad guys all run away to the left of the screen, [screams and sounds of running away] as Mario is coming home from the right side of the screen, [we can hear Mario's footsteps] to avoid them bumping into each other.

[Scene switching from inside/outside the house]

Luigi is cleaning up the mess left by Bowser and his friends before Mario gets back home. The timer countdown music begins to play and we see the screen cut alternatively to Luigi trying to clean up and Mario getting nearer to the house.

[Final scene with both Mario and Luigi inside the house]

[Song and final credits]

The very final scene will finish with [The End] message and the music will begin to play [song undecided as of yet] with the credits rolling upwards.

The credits will be written humorously.

[CREDITS]

Created By
Nietzlawe
Keven11Twenty7

Story and Dialogue
Nietzlawe

Updated: 10/08/08 6:27 AM Log in to comment! | Share this!

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12 Comments

Aug. 10, 2008 | 3:50 PM Keven11Twenty7 says:

Can you fix the tital. It's {Mario's Unexpected House Party}. Can I join it.....Ohh wait I'm already in it.

Aug. 11, 2008 | 12:05 AM nietzlawe responds:

Yes I have fixed it now. You are a part of it.


Sep. 23, 2008 | 7:49 PM Keven11Twenty7 says:

Even though we haven't done much in the past couple of months. I want you to know, I swear on my life! That we will do this, and I have never given up hope to it. I always thought about it in school. What am I going to plot next in it? Where will I get voices? This will probably be released in like 2020, but by God I am going to do this.

The word of the unwise, Kevan

Sep. 23, 2008 | 11:28 PM nietzlawe responds:

You sound back to your good old self. Deluded and totally smashed like a man who has taken cocaine, absinth, heroin, weed, skunk, lsd and injected 95 needles into himself simultaneously whilst completing Super Mario Brothers 1 in a room with hypnotic black and white twirls on the walls, hallucinating patterns all over. David Firth is in the room handing out some acid as well, seeing as he is the regular Acid King. There are beer cans, ashtrays, curry trays scattered all over the living room and we are all smacked off our tits. Welcome back to the good old days Mr Kevan.


Sep. 23, 2008 | 7:55 PM Keven11Twenty7 says:

Why isn't my name first? I mean you got the dialogue all to yourself.

Sep. 23, 2008 | 11:31 PM nietzlawe responds:

The necessary changes have been made. You are right, by the beard of zeus, we will finish this Flash by the year 2020. We will give Mario a grey beard.


Sep. 25, 2008 | 7:04 PM Keven11Twenty7 says:

Why hasn't anyone seen this! Can you broadcast this in forums. Or is it here to be private, and if anybody journeys through all you previous blogs they will find the treasure that lies here.

Anyway Mario has been around since 1985 that makes him?.........23, I think? So 43 after we make the movie. Well by God tell mariomeister about this. He has a mic. I think? He will play one of the characters if we can get him to help us. BUT ONLY I MAKE THE CHANGES! So if you guys want something changed, It has to stay in my image of what I want. I don't want it to be changed fully.

So if you think of something, you bolth have to go through me.

Sep. 25, 2008 | 8:22 PM nietzlawe responds:

Seeing as it is Mario and you are a bigger fan than me, I will give you directing rights, you can select how the story goes if you want.


Sep. 25, 2008 | 8:57 PM Keven11Twenty7 says:

I mean you can still give..........Why isn't my name first on the Created by?!

Sep. 25, 2008 | 9:06 PM nietzlawe responds:

Because of alphabetical name issues. Oh wait ... K comes before N.

Updated: Sep. 25, 2008, 9:07 PM

Sep. 26, 2008 | 6:41 PM Keven11Twenty7 says:

Well I would call you a dumb ass, but I have no room to talk.

Sep. 26, 2008 | 7:25 PM nietzlawe responds:

No room to talk? you have over 8,000 characters of space to type here man.


Sep. 26, 2008 | 8:38 PM Keven11Twenty7 says:

No I mean that explaining it would not have enough room. Not really I just am the same wa.............My name still isn't first. Why? I will chop off your fingers everyday until I see my name first.

Now we understand each other.

Oct. 5, 2008 | 12:12 AM nietzlawe responds:

You're like the guy who pretended to be my friend, who slowly over the weeks and months, turns into a big bad bully.


Oct. 5, 2008 | 4:56 AM Keven11Twenty7 says:

Ok to tell the truth that made me laugh so hard, so that it was midnight and everybody woke up from the loud noise of me saying that neitzlawe made a funny.

Oct. 5, 2008 | 6:16 AM nietzlawe responds:

I'm glad that I am able to control your laughter strings with mere words from a million miles away. Good that aint it!


Oct. 6, 2008 | 9:06 PM Keven11Twenty7 says:

Well it goes to sho..........Why?........Why, Why, Why? After all this talking you can't just go and edit my name first in the Credits. I mean YOU HAVE THE STORY AND DIALOGUE!!! Ok, this is the last time I am saying this.

Please for the love of GOD!! Ooops I mean for the love of your blogs, please change IT!

I gave you like how long?

Oct. 8, 2008 | 6:26 AM nietzlawe responds:

Listen. Today. Your. Eyes. Might. Deceive. You. Because. Your. Name. Is. Now. First. In. The. List.


Oct. 8, 2008 | 5:58 PM Keven11Twenty7 says:

Are you sure?

Oct. 9, 2008 | 6:18 AM nietzlawe responds:

Its my final answer.


Oct. 11, 2008 | 2:07 PM MARIOMASTER123123123 says:

can i be in it

Oct. 17, 2008 | 1:21 AM nietzlawe responds:

Yes you can, but you must cross my palm with silver... or alternatively just make me cross and I'll let ya in and everything... you'll get a starter pack and a membership card. Welcome to the cult.


Oct. 16, 2008 | 6:18 PM Keven11Twenty7 says:

Maybe, what can you do?

.........am i going insane?

Oct. 17, 2008 | 1:22 AM nietzlawe responds:

You are losing your mind, don't worry it is fun.

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